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hammer of Moradin
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 Posted - 01 Dec 2006 : 19:00:24
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When I saw this one was out I picked it up immediately. Definately worth the price of admission.
I like the setting here, the Lake of Mists, with the uncertainty of the surroundings and of the characters' situation. Frost, of course, will be a recurring theme it seems, so I like that we keep getting pieces of information about the climate and how the characters are affected by it.
Nice play on the antagonist, Wallach. He can hold his own against the group, yet then we find out that he's not the one Amira should be worried about. That tells us something about the power they will be going up against without a direct confrontation.
Reminds me of Last of the Mohicans, in a good way, with the setting, the primal environment, and the characters. Why a War Wizard, though, Mark? |
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 01 Dec 2006 : 22:49:47
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
When I saw this one was out I picked it up immediately. Definately worth the price of admission.
Thanks for the kind words, sir. Just curious: Have you found the book in stores yet, or are your comments based on the sample chapter?
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
Reminds me of Last of the Mohicans, in a good way, with the setting, the primal environment, and the characters.
I read lots of Cooper in high school, though I have to admit I always liked The Deerslayer better than Mohicans. And as much as I admire Cooper, I'll be the first to admit that all of Mark Twain's criticisms are spot on.
But yeah, I've always loved the wilderness settings.
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
Why a War Wizard, though, Mark?
Why not? 
Seriously though, I very much wanted an "outsider's view" of the Wastes. That way, as a writer, I can describe things as Amira experiences them and relish in the strangeness and foreignness. A native of the area probably wouldn't have remarked on such things.
But why a war wizard specifically?
In researching the setting, I looked through all the RPG material and really tried to focus on FR-specific stuff. The War Wizard really grabbed me. When I expressed interest in that area, my editor Susan Morris suggested I ask Ed Greenwood for more information. I did, and Mr. Greenwood graciously sent me quite a lot of info. He said he had "a few notes" and sent me something like 48 pages. It was a huge help.
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Alaundo
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Posted - 01 Dec 2006 : 23:11:06
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Originally posted by Mark S.
<snip>When I expressed interest in that area, my editor Susan Morris suggested I ask Ed Greenwood for more information. I did, and Mr. Greenwood graciously sent me quite a lot of info. He said he had "a few notes" and sent me something like 48 pages. It was a huge help.
 Aye, that's Ed  Ed's "brief" view of Candlekeep turned out to be many pages long and is one of the best pieces of lore i've ever read  (Ye can read this in my signature, for those who are interested). |
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Besshalar
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Finland
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Posted - 04 Dec 2006 : 12:58:04
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Greetings Mark
Read the first two chapters and it is a good read thus far. I like the way you're using words like bukhla (= a word referring to a female dog in english ? ) to create the feel of different ethnicities. Also can't wait to find out more about the Frost folk. |
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Swordsage
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Posted - 04 Dec 2006 : 22:52:27
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Umm, I think what Hammer of Moradin was alluding to was what is a War Wizard of Cormyr (half a world away) doing in the Lake of Mists region? Is he an ex-War Wizard? Is he on official business of the Crown? Is he on holidays? What's the character's grounding in that region other than "it seemed like a cool idea at the time"?
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 00:32:12
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Originally posted by Besshalar
I like the way you're using words like bukhla (= a word referring to a female dog in english ? ) to create the feel of different ethnicities.
Thanks! Actually, the meaning is even more crude than that. A word that I wouldn't write in English. It was inspired by episode 20 of The Sopranos. Bukhla means the same thing that Christopher was teaching the actors on the movie set.
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Originally posted by BesshalarAlso can't wait to find out more about the Frost folk.
They're right out of the RPG product FROSTBURN, though I tried to find a way to "fit" them into existing Realms cosmology. Let me know what you think.
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 00:33:14
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Originally posted by Swordsage
Umm, I think what Hammer of Moradin was alluding to was what is a War Wizard of Cormyr (half a world away) doing in the Lake of Mists region? Is he an ex-War Wizard? Is he on official business of the Crown?
She is there for a reason, but you don't find out what until Chapter 6. And even then, don't believe everything you're told. War Wizards are a crafty lot.
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George Krashos
Master of Realmslore
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 01:32:48
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This book hasn't reached my shores yet Mark, but I'm intrigued as I have a passing interest in the Lake of Mists region. Look forward to reading it.
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Besshalar
Learned Scribe
Finland
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 11:12:13
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| Ah never read that supplement. Am I right in guessing you are also quite a movie/tv buff there's a very cinematic feel to the "cuts" between scenes. It's been hectic and I still haven't cleared the first four chapters . :) |
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 17:09:49
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Originally posted by Besshalar
Am I right in guessing you are also quite a movie/tv buff there's a very cinematic feel to the "cuts" between scenes. It's been hectic and I still haven't cleared the first four chapters . :)
Yes, very much so. I love storytelling in all its forms, be it novels, songs, comic books, tv, or movies. But yes, I'm a big movie/tv buff. It's been kind of a slow period for movies lately. But TV seems to have taken up the slack quite nicely. There's lots of great stuff on TV these days. Still lots of dreck, yes, but there are defintely some pearls in the mud if you take time to look.
I've been reading a lot of "thrillers" over the past two years, so that probably had some influence as well. F. Paul Wilson's Repairman Jack books often have very quick scenes that cut back-and-forth.
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RodOdom
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 17:54:11
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 05 Dec 2006 : 18:40:02
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Originally posted by RodOdom
BTW, how do you pronounce your last name, Mark ?
Seh-HESS-ted.
Very German. http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sehestedt
But I'm not strictly German. I'm an American mutt. My bloodline hits pretty much every continent except South America (as far as I know) and Antartica (because there are no penguins in the family).
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KnightErrantJR
Great Reader
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Posted - 06 Dec 2006 : 22:19:59
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| Mark, I just managed to secure a copy of this book, so I haven't had much of a chance to delve into this one, but I have to say that you earned points with me right off the bat for being the first Realms author to quote G K Chesterton . . . looking forward to what looks to be a very interesting book. |
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Mark S.
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Posted - 07 Dec 2006 : 17:17:36
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I have to say that you earned points with me right off the bat for being the first Realms author to quote G K Chesterton . . .
I love Chesterton. He has been a huge influence upon my life. Truly one of my heroes.
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KnightErrantJR
Great Reader
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Posted - 09 Dec 2006 : 02:16:10
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There is something that I liked about jumping into the action without too much exposition on who and what everyone is. It gives the story a lot of texture right off the bat, and even for people that know the setting, hinting at a greater level of detail without diving right in gives you a certain degree of investiture to keep following these characters throughout the story.
I definitely like the idea that the different tribes of the Hordelands are being differentiated. I also like the duality that Walloch keeps mentioning “Tuigan” as a group, even as we get a lot of hints about the specific tribes within that general terminology (especially for all of us geeks that remember that “Tuigans” were one tribe of the steppes).
Horay for the appearance of Lythari and Fost Folk both. Lythari are definitely an interesting part of elven lore in the Realms, so its great to see them again, since they have appeared very little in the Forgotten Realms novels. I was just mentioning the Frost Folk on th site recently, as I was glad they were updated in Frostburn, and I liked the idea that they were regardes as Sossrim due to their features, and that there was an implication that they were Raumathari that made deals with ancient devils (especially since dealing with devils would be considered doubly bad considering the war with Narfell).
As far as the characters and the development of the story, definitely interested to see how the relationship between Amira and her “son” developed, and why Amira is apparently a renegade from the War Wizards, and why they would be interested enough to track her down this far away from Cormyr. I liked the idea that Walloch illustrates that “educated” doesn't mean “refined,” as he was quite crude for a wizard, and I found it amusing that he was so thrilled with himself over besting Amira with a rock instead of the Art. Definitely didn't bemoan his demise though.
I'll be interested to see some more details on the humans in this region, especially what the office of “belgaken” entails. All in all, a very interesting start to the story. Good pace so far and definitely enough interesting hooks to make me want to keep moving forward in this tale and find out some more about these characters and their situations.
But one minor point that I have to mention. Maybe Lendri is just short, but Realms elves are suppose to be the same height as humans. Dispite my anal retentive nitpick, what I have seen of the character I have liked, and I look forward to seeing more of him as the story progresses. |
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Mark S.
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Posted - 09 Dec 2006 : 02:46:42
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Thanks for the thoughts KnightErrantJR. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
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But one minor point that I have to mention. Maybe Lendri is just short, but Realms elves are suppose to be the same height as humans. Dispite my anal retentive nitpick, what I have seen of the character I have liked, and I look forward to seeing more of him as the story progresses.
Lendri is certainly shorter than Gyaidun, but Gyaidun is a very tall man. He's well over 6 feet. Lendri is around 5 and a half, which is about average human height. I'd guess that Lendri is probably an average-sized elf, while Gyaidun is definitely a taller than average human.
If you're wanting more info on the humans of the Wastes, be sure to check out DRAGON #349. There's a great article in there that "updates" the area. Highly recommended.
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KnightErrantJR
Great Reader
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Posted - 09 Dec 2006 : 03:41:47
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| Sorry for the nitpick, but I appreciate the clarification. Definately enjoying the book so far, and I did indeed enjoy that particular article (and the web enhancement for it) from Dragon. Its definately been a story that has kept me wanted to read on, and you have used some very interesting characters . . . thanks for the reply! |
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 09 Dec 2006 : 03:59:33
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Originally posted by KnightErrantJR
Sorry for the nitpick, but I appreciate the clarification.
No apology necessary! I love the nitpicks. Looking back through the book again, I found a mistake myself, but since no one else seems to have caught it, I think I'll keep it to myself. |
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Lord Rad
Great Reader
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Posted - 18 Dec 2006 : 18:27:32
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Well I finally got the book and what a great start
I'm only a couple of chapters in but it's kept me completely gripped so far. Unfortunately my lunch break ended and I had to get back to work 
The opening was really well done and kept me on the edge of my seat. As soon as I read about the hounds which had had their vocal chords sliced, I knew this was going to be a good one! The chase with Walloch's men through the trees was very good and the atmosphere caused by the lake was very eerie.
Even after reading about Walloch for such a short time, i'm loving his character. I'm finding him quite intriguing.. he came across as a brutal slaver and then later I find him to be a competant wizard...quite an interesting turn of character. I also found him to be quite comical at times, like when he trudged through the camp after loosing his quarry, knocking things over, and slapping the goat
The capture scene was great too. I liked the touch with the leather being soaked around the wrists. The raven also added an eerie element to the scene and gave that cinematic feeling of tension.
With the thug running back to the clearing through the bushes, it wasn't revealed who was making the noise and again game that feeling of watching a movie.
The elves and the Frost Folk added a whole new element to the story too and i'm really looking forward to breaking further into this book.
Great stuff! |
Lord Rad
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Lord Rad
Great Reader
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Posted - 19 Dec 2006 : 23:33:31
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I like the tense scene with Jalan hiding in the log when Lendri arrives. I wasn't even sure myself if it were friend or foe trying to coax him out
Nicely done how it wasn't described what happened when Lenrdi and Jalan stopped in their tracks, and then the scene switching to later on when Lendri arrives at the camp looking on death's door.
The whole feeling and way this is written is great. It's got such an eerie and mystical feeling.
I like the idea of Gyaidun and Lendri being blood brothers and Gyaidun heading out for revenge at what happened to Lendri.
With the foreign culture of this tribe, again it was well done how Amira didn't understand the meaning of belkagen (sp?)...being priestshamandruidwizard as she could only imagine it being one or another, rather than all tied into one.
Kind of eerie again when Gyaidun returns and reports how Walloch and company are all dead and frozen solid. Wow! I thought Walloch was going to be around for some time yet
I could almost feel the exertion and pain when Jalan was runnning from the camp. I'm gonna use the word "eerie" again when thinking about the wolves circling him and the cloaked Frost Folk emerging |
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Xysma
Master of Realmslore
USA
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Posted - 22 Dec 2006 : 04:31:51
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Originally posted by Mark S.
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Originally posted by Besshalar
I like the way you're using words like bukhla (= a word referring to a female dog in english ? ) to create the feel of different ethnicities.
Thanks! Actually, the meaning is even more crude than that. A word that I wouldn't write in English. It was inspired by episode 20 of The Sopranos. Bukhla means the same thing that Christopher was teaching the actors on the movie set.
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Originally posted by BesshalarAlso can't wait to find out more about the Frost folk.
They're right out of the RPG product FROSTBURN, though I tried to find a way to "fit" them into existing Realms cosmology. Let me know what you think.
I just posted a question about the Frost Folk in a different forum, thanks for the info. It's been awhile since I looked through Frostburn I guess I had forgotten about them. The way you introduced them into the story immediately grabbed me and wouldn't let go. I see a journey into the wastes in my players' near future. |
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Xysma
Master of Realmslore
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Posted - 22 Dec 2006 : 04:39:25
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Originally posted by hammer of Moradin
Reminds me of Last of the Mohicans, in a good way, with the setting, the primal environment, and the characters.
I agree, I got a real strong Native American vibe from the elf and his blood brother as well as the frost folk. This has been a great read so far, I can't wait to get back into it. |
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 22 Dec 2006 : 21:27:16
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Originally posted by Xysma
I agree, I got a real strong Native American vibe from the elf and his blood brother as well as the frost folk. This has been a great read so far, I can't wait to get back into it.
The Vil Adanrath culture was very much inspired by various Native American cultures. Their language is based (VERY loosely) on Tuscarora, one of the peoples that made up the Iroquois League. Blame Don Bassingthwaite for that one. He was kind enough to send me a Tuscarora Dictionary a few years ago because he knows what a language geek I am.
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Rinonalyrna Fathomlin
Great Reader
USA
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Posted - 19 Apr 2007 : 22:25:10
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I just started reading this book and I am loving it so far. I was drawn in right away because no time is wasted on lengthy and unnecessary exposition--the first scene is an action scene, and I thought it was very effective and compelling. I also think that a mother's search for her son makes for a more relatable story than yet another "find the magic item" tale.
And yes, I'm itching to learn more about the various cultures of the Wastes that are being touched on. |
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Eremite
Learned Scribe
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Posted - 20 Apr 2007 : 16:35:21
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Dear Mark,
I just read this two nights ago and thoroughly enjoyed it. Cool characters, great depictions of the winter wolves and frost folk and some really good ancient lore. Well done; hope to see more from you. |
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Acolyte
USA
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Posted - 27 Sep 2007 : 16:50:50
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So I got this when it first came out, and just started it abojut ten minutes ago. It seems really interesting Mark. Are you going to write anymore realms novels. Hope you do. I will post later once I finish chapter 4.
Sweet water and light laughter until next I post again. |
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acro
Acolyte
USA
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Posted - 28 Sep 2007 : 00:39:04
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| Finally finished chapter 4, not quite what I expected at the end though Mark. But I must say it was very nicely done. I hope it continues as it does though, because it is very interesting. |
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Mark S.
Forgotten Realms Author
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Posted - 10 Oct 2007 : 17:53:30
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Originally posted by acro
Are you going to write anymore realms novels. Hope you do. I will post later once I finish chapter 4.
Thanks very much for the kind words.
Yes, I am doing at least one more FR book, but I'm not sure I'm supposed to spill any beans yet. It should be public knowledge by the time Realms of War comes out.
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Ergdusch
Master of Realmslore
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Posted - 11 Oct 2007 : 09:53:36
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I am reading this book right now and I have to say: I really enjoyed the first chapters of this book. They through you into the plot right away and you find no time to consider stop reading. Head on into the trouble. No wasted words for a slow beginning. "Role Initiative" from the first moment at the game table. A great start off.
Moreove, as the setting if the book is rather untouched as of yet, lots of insite into this unexplored land. Great work. |
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Dennis
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Posted - 12 Jan 2011 : 18:11:46
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| Three things made me want to devour this book: the heroine, the villain, and the setting. All perfectly depicted! |
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