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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  20:37:34  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thanks, Teneck. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And I do hope to write more--about these characters, or others in the Realms.

A note about Shadowbane, the "fast paladin":

The name obviously comes from the Shadowbane Inquisitor prestige class (Complete Adventurer), though I went a little farther and dropped the "knight-in-shining-but-heavy-armor" trope and made a more roguish-sort-of-paladin, in keeping with his roots as a rogue. Using the tricks of the trade to root out thieves and such.

The concept for Shadowbane actually came from a 3.5 D&D Realms campaign I ran a few years ago. One of the NPCs--Kalen--was a rogue-turned-paladin assigned as a sort of guide/escort for the PCs, and he was a tragic/conflicted sort of paladin who had originally been a thief/assassin and was trying to redeem himself. All his friends were killed, leaving him (and the PCs) to avenge them . . . or take the high road and bring their foes to justice. (And the PCs could sort of push him either way.)

I played Shadowbane (leveled up to about 13th) in a one-shot adventure once, and the DM was flabbergasted at how often I was making bluff rolls--and could explain away that I wasn't violating my alignment. I would twist the truth--not lie, but not be plain and forthright, either. It was a good time.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Teneck
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  20:44:04  Show Profile  Visit Teneck's Homepage Send Teneck a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie



A note about Shadowbane, the "fast paladin":

The name obviously comes from the Shadowbane Inquisitor prestige class (Complete Adventurer), though I went a little farther and dropped the "knight-in-shining-but-heavy-armor" trope and made a more roguish-sort-of-paladin, in keeping with his roots as a rogue. Using the tricks of the trade to root out thieves and such.




That is such a great concept, sometimes (being old school) it is hard to get the "plate" paladin out of my head, not to mention my players are as old school as I am. This is a such a neat character concept for a game not just a novel, makes me want to force someone else to DM for a while. By the way Paladin has in my group always been one of those "ok we need a pallie....but who wants to play him" So I always chose to play one, turns out that I really LIKE playing one, and I think I will like playing a "Non-typical" one just as much.

"Go ahead...Sleep in the church...the vampires can't get ya in the church" Any DM...any time.

"He's like a trained ape...without the training"
Simon after Jane trashed the Med lab
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  21:21:37  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I highly encourage you give rogue/paladin a shot. I had so much fun playing that guy (obviously--it turned into a book)!

Take the Devoted Inquisitor feat in CAdv so you can multiclass freely, and go through the levels at more-or-less of a balance. That way, you can free up your rogue skill points for skills like bluff, listen/spot, and stealthy stuff, while paladin buys you sense motive, heal, etc. I used bluff mostly in combat to set up sneak attacks (and with a bastard/greatsword, that's pretty awesome).

It's a demanding build from an ability score perspective, since 3.5 rogues are all about the DEX (and a little CHA, if you play talking rogues) and 3.5 paladins STR, WIS, CHA. But WIS and CHA do well for you (particularly if you pick the right skills). You'll probably have a lower strength and con than most paladins, but it's worth it if you build to your abilities. Aasimar is a good race to go for, as are straight humans (extra feat is definitely worth it).

Try not to let anyone know you're a paladin--make it an awesome surprise.

There are fundamentally two different directions rogue/paladins go--toward one or the other. Either you're a stealthy rogue/striker type with some neat smiting abilities (sounds like that's you), or you're a heavily armed/armored paladin who has some keen senses and can pull out some pretty withering attacks with a little fancy swordplay. My version leans toward the former.

Also (and I don't know if you play 4e at all), rogue and paladin don't work too well together (though a paladin with some movement abilities from rogue is worthwhile) . . . but check out the Avenger class (PHB2)--it's more or less exactly what we're looking at here.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Teneck
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  21:26:32  Show Profile  Visit Teneck's Homepage Send Teneck a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I think I would go for the Stealth Pallie most of all ..it just seems to work better. So did you level Rogue/Pallie at one for one in levels or did you top it out in Rogue at like 5th or so?

"Go ahead...Sleep in the church...the vampires can't get ya in the church" Any DM...any time.

"He's like a trained ape...without the training"
Simon after Jane trashed the Med lab
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  21:57:57  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
When I played Kalen as an NPC, he started rog2/pal2, went to r2/p4, then shadowbane inquisitor. As I recall, I had two alternate 13th level builds for him: r3/p4/shi6 and r8/p5. If you like the Shadowbane Inquisitor, go with the former (that's the one I actually played). If you want a pure stealth paladin with some nice rogue abilities, go for the latter. My ideal 20th level build for him would probably be rogue 5/paladin 5/shadowbane inquisitor 10.

I neglected to mention: particularly if you boost up your CHA, divine grace is an absolute godsend for evasion, which is already good with your high DEX. You basically never get hit by fireballs.

Cheers


P.S. Here's a whole post on my blog about it. Dun dun dun! Secret hinting origins of Shadowbane? . . . nah, not really. I just had a cool concept and when it came time to pitch a Realms novel two years later, I still had the idea in my head.

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Teneck
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Posted - 20 Jul 2009 :  22:08:34  Show Profile  Visit Teneck's Homepage Send Teneck a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Well it obviously worked well in novel form, I can't wait to try it in game.

"Go ahead...Sleep in the church...the vampires can't get ya in the church" Any DM...any time.

"He's like a trained ape...without the training"
Simon after Jane trashed the Med lab
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George Krashos
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Posted - 27 Jul 2009 :  02:36:50  Show Profile Send George Krashos a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Just finished. Masterfully done, sir. Masterfully done.

-- George Krashos

"Because only we, contrary to the barbarians, never count the enemy in battle." -- Aeschylus
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 27 Jul 2009 :  15:12:07  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by George Krashos

Just finished. Masterfully done, sir. Masterfully done.
-- George Krashos
Thank you, sir! That means an awful lot, coming from a gentleman and a scholar such as yourself.

Cheers


Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Lady Kazandra
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Mr. de Bie. Downshadow was simply grand! I was blown away by this tale. As far as I'm concerned, you're fast becoming my favourite Realms author. I can't wait to see what you'll be coming up with next.

I don't have time at the moment to add any thoughts to the other threads in the Book Club, but I will be writing a review for Amazon.

Thank you for weeks of enjoyment, love, and tears I had while reading Downshadow.

"Once upon a time the plural of 'wizard' was 'war'." -- The Last Continent, by Terry Pratchett
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Wooly Rupert
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quote:
Originally posted by Lady Kazandra

Mr. de Bie. Downshadow was simply grand! I was blown away by this tale. As far as I'm concerned, you're fast becoming my favourite Realms author. I can't wait to see what you'll be coming up with next.

I don't have time at the moment to add any thoughts to the other threads in the Book Club, but I will be writing a review for Amazon.

Thank you for weeks of enjoyment, love, and tears I had while reading Downshadow.




Does this mean Sage finally gets to read it?

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The Sage
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quote:
Originally posted by Wooly Rupert

quote:
Originally posted by Lady Kazandra

Mr. de Bie. Downshadow was simply grand! I was blown away by this tale. As far as I'm concerned, you're fast becoming my favourite Realms author. I can't wait to see what you'll be coming up with next.

I don't have time at the moment to add any thoughts to the other threads in the Book Club, but I will be writing a review for Amazon.

Thank you for weeks of enjoyment, love, and tears I had while reading Downshadow.




Does this mean Sage finally gets to read it?

'Tis likely. Once I'm done with The Great Hunt.

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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 01 Aug 2009 :  08:49:21  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
You are very welcome, Lady K! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Nefarious
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Posted - 22 Sep 2009 :  19:38:50  Show Profile  Visit Nefarious's Homepage Send Nefarious a Private Message  Reply with Quote
This book is a fantastic read! I usually spend a few days reading most novels but simply could not put this one down. I continued to think I had it figured out but you proved me wrong, Erik. The characters were extremely well written and I really enjoyed the 'tabloid' aspect.
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 23 Sep 2009 :  02:16:33  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thank you, Nefarious--I am glad you enjoyed.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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geok1ng
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Posted - 08 Oct 2009 :  16:06:20  Show Profile  Visit geok1ng's Homepage Send geok1ng a Private Message  Reply with Quote
This is my first post here, i made the account just to express my disgust with page 268:

"He'd helped with her toilet so that he didn't have to untie her. She'd nearly died of embarassement, but he'd just stared at her with the same bored expression until she yielded. Ther was nothing erotic about it."

And to make even clear to the readers that the author is being scatologycal for free in page 269 Rath ungags AND unties Myrin! Surely the last lawful evil( 4.e has destroied the LE concept) char on Toril should know better...

I have concerns with the Paladin Vigilante concept. Is it OK to be a Vigilante and defy Waterdeep laws every night on Downshadow, and still have Paladin status? I defend the right of a self proclaimed Paladin to kill evil people on combat, but he has NO LEGAL right to invade downshadow every night and demand surrender of the evil doers. What would Shadowbane do if some bad guy simply gave up and said: Take me into custody! He has NO RIGHT to beat him senseless and drop him on the nearest Watch/Guard post- the bad guy is NOT resisting going to jail after all. Vigilante and Paladin are "professions" that are usually at odds, and only a blind/deaf/smart god would keep a Paladin/Vigilante follower. Maybe after the spellplague debacle the idiots of the former House of Triad are starting to get real: it is hard to be good, and harder still to spread goodness.

And after the 4-5th woman falls in love/desire with the hero i started thinking :this is a little bit too much for a scarred and broken-nosed "savior knight"!. On this topic i think what happens at "Corsair- Blades of The Moonsea" more in touch with reality- the hero saves a merchant lady from a band of pirates/reapers, and moments after riding with her in the lap he wakes up to cruel reality- the girl is terrified and scared, not sexually aroused...

I couldnt avoid seeing Myrin as a new Shadril/spellfire wielder overpowered-realms-shaking char. Do we really need this kind of NPC? Isnt the new Zass Tham enough?

To be fair with what is good on the novel: the dialogues between the 2 guardswomen are hilarious, the Fayne/Kalen stances are excellent. Its good to have humor and genious in text instead of overdrama and power: we already have our fair share of tragical, superpowered highlevel chars using mythical artifact swords with Raidon Kaine and Angul (boy, i love that sword, the best one since Lillacor).

Am i looking foward for a sequence? Not really- the only romance i would like to see is more Kalen- Rayse. Myrin is too insipid and realms-shaking for good romance material. And Kalen needs more shaping to reach "Mister Cale- First of Mask" Dark/Anti-hero status, i am not even sure he has it: his first novel shows him at too high a power level for good char development, but i wish the author good luck with Fox, the girl seens to have had a terrible spellplague time: not only she can not touch people but has become an uostarting waterdeep merchant, seens a fate far worse than death for a freedom loving adventurer young

Edited by - geok1ng on 08 Oct 2009 16:19:03
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Gang Falconhand
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Posted - 15 Oct 2009 :  13:40:43  Show Profile  Visit Gang Falconhand's Homepage Send Gang Falconhand a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I loved it. I've read Ghostwalker and Depths of Madness and this is by far my favourite of the three.

What're you working on next? :p




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Erik Scott de Bie
Forgotten Realms Author

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Posted - 15 Oct 2009 :  17:38:06  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I have several of my own non-WotC books that I'm writing on spec and trying to sell to publishers.

I have a short story which will be appearing in the Realms of the Dead anthology come January. Also, a bit of game design for them--I'm a contributing author in their Plane Above: Astral Sea sourcebook (April), and I have a DDI article coming out any time now: a writeup of the Eye of Justice, which is oddly listed as being by "Staff", even though it was written by Eytan and I, neither of us being actual staff members at WotC.

That said, I have no novels currently contracted with WotC. I'd love to write more, but they haven't come knocking as yet.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 15 Oct 2009 :  18:22:09  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hi Geok1ng, a couple of replies:

quote:
Originally posted by geok1ng

This is my first post here, i made the account just to express my disgust with page 268: "He'd helped with her toilet so that he didn't have to untie her. She'd nearly died of embarassement, but he'd just stared at her with the same bored expression until she yielded. Ther was nothing erotic about it."
And to make even clear to the readers that the author is being scatologycal for free in page 269 Rath ungags AND unties Myrin! Surely the last lawful evil( 4.e has destroied the LE concept) char on Toril should know better...
Firstly, I personally find it outside the realm of believability that characters can go through an entire book without ever having to relieve themselves, so I like to put in small, tasteful references (which I believe this is) to simple bodily functions as it's significant. As a writer, I am not going to avoid writing my story the way it needs to be written.

It is also pretty ambiguous: for all we know, Myrin's "toilet" could have been just washing her hands.

And the fact that I mention it is meant to bring out something about Myrin’s character—specifically, how she is a bit naïve in focusing on something that isn’t really an issue at all, whilst glossing over her really dire straits. This is something that real people do when placed in very dangerous situations--they focus on the small, personal things.

It is not meant to be offensive in any way, and there is no scatological humor about it or extremely inappropriate eroticism (even says so on the page cited). That said, I'm sorry it rubbed you the wrong way.

Secondly, as to your second point, I want to clarify that Rath very purposefully unties and ungags Myrin to prove a point: to wit, that she doesn't have the guts to do what is necessary to escape (i.e. kill him), so she might as well not try--thereby crushing her last vestige of self-confidence. This was my intention; Rath never makes stupid mistakes except when carried away by his anger at a situation. (One of his flaws.)

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I have concerns with the Paladin Vigilante concept. Is it OK to be a Vigilante and defy Waterdeep laws every night on Downshadow, and still have Paladin status? I defend the right of a self proclaimed Paladin to kill evil people on combat, but he has NO LEGAL right to invade downshadow every night and demand surrender of the evil doers.
Well, he has as much legal right as any adventurer has to do anything in the name of "goodness" or "justice." The point is that for him, justice is more important than the law. But I digress. More on this point . . .

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What would Shadowbane do if some bad guy simply gave up and said: Take me into custody! He has NO RIGHT to beat him senseless and drop him on the nearest Watch/Guard post- the bad guy is NOT resisting going to jail after all.
That’s an interesting question—I don’t think Shadowbane would attack an unarmed or helpless foe, unless he thought it was a trick. Probably Shadowbane would just leave him alone and go off to somewhere he is more needed (with enemies who fight back). Remember that he hesitated to attack a peaceable Rath when they first met. But more on this . . .

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Vigilante and Paladin are "professions" that are usually at odds, and only a blind/deaf/smart god would keep a Paladin/Vigilante follower. Maybe after the spellplague debacle the idiots of the former House of Triad are starting to get real: it is hard to be good, and harder still to spread goodness.
Ah, there's the crux of it.

I think you hit the nail on the head with these questions (though the contempt is unnecessary). Basically, these sort of moral issues are exactly what I'm asking in the book, and these are exactly what you should be asking yourself as you read it. How far does one go to be "good" without losing what you believe in? And Shadowbane does have that extended period of doubt, where he has compromised his principles and loses his powers.

And why be coy? It's the Batman theme: a fundamentally good man walking a really fine line, doing what he sees as justice that won't be done otherwise. For Shadowbane, the Watch is powerless to fight the good fight, and so he does it himself. There's that whole scene later in the book that makes it clear that the Watch/Guard largely leaves Downshadow to itself--they only delve down to rescue an important priestess from the surface Waterdeep. Shadowbane is going where he feels that he's needed.

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And after the 4-5th woman falls in love/desire with the hero i started thinking :this is a little bit too much for a scarred and broken-nosed "savior knight"!.
I'm sorry that didn't work for you. Shadowbane is indeed sort of a love-magnet, and I could have played that down a little--the point was to invest him with a strongly romantic nature without making him some sort of obnoxious fop (the literary trope, not the genre cliché).

Though if it makes you feel better, only one woman has a purposefully teenage-girl-type crush on him in the book (Myrin); one woman he had a relationship with in the past and there are still feelings there (the way you might have with an ex) though it is basically over (that's Rayse); and one woman seduces him and feels conflicted (Fayne). As for the rest of the women in the novel, there's some flirtation and significant glances going on, but the intention was to keep that appropriate to the tone of Waterdeep in specific, the Realms in general. And because I just like writing about women.

Sorry if you feel like I overdid it!

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I couldnt avoid seeing Myrin as a new Shadril/spellfire wielder overpowered-realms-shaking char. Do we really need this kind of NPC? Isnt the new Zass Tham enough?
Well, I guess that's possible--at this point, we just don't know who or what Myrin is enough to say. I will say that it is too simple to look at Myrin as a world-shaker, power-player along the lines of the Chosen of Mystra or something of the sort. She does have a particular purpose and history, but she is really not any more powerful than another character of her level. Just as a weapon you cannot control isn’t really a weapon, “I cause chaos when I try to do too much” isn’t much of a class feature.

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And Kalen needs more shaping to reach "Mister Cale- First of Mask" Dark/Anti-hero status, i am not even sure he has it: his first novel shows him at too high a power level for good char development
Hmm. I'm curious how he's "too high a power level"--as I wrote him, he's basically a mid-to-high heroic tier PC (in 4e terms). I didn't think I gave him all that much in terms of earth-shaking power--mostly, he's just a capable gymnast and sword-fighter, with your expected lay-on-hands ability. I think Kalen is roughly comparable in terms of power level to Erevis Cale (your example) when he first appeared. The analogy isn’t quite accurate, as the purposes behind Kalen and Erevis aren’t the same, just like Paul and I aren’t the same.

I guess I'm just not interested in telling the "farmboy rolls out of bed one morning and finds he has a destiny to save the world" sort of story. Instead, I started Kalen's story at a slightly more advanced stage--he's already built himself a fair ways through the toil of low-level power.

If you’re curious on this point, you might check out the companion story to Downshadow, which contains a very young Kalen from when this all began: "The Last Legend of Gedrin Shadowbane"

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i wish the author good luck with Fox, the girl seens to have had a terrible spellplague time: not only she can not touch people but has become an uostarting waterdeep merchant, seens a fate far worse than death for a freedom loving adventurer young
I do hope to tell more of her story when I get the chance.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"

Edited by - Erik Scott de Bie on 15 Oct 2009 18:38:08
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Copper Elven Vampire
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Question... I find it completely unlikely that Elaith "The Serpent" Craulnober didn't know anything about the happenings in this book.

As you must know Erik, Elaith runs 75% of Waterdeep and it's underground. In the novel "City of Splendours" by Ed and Elaine, he ends up involving himself into the plot of the story just because Waterdeep is HIS city, and he'd rather run off all those he sees as a threat than suffer them a piece of how he likes his Waterdeep to be.

In the novel "Silverfall" he shows his face in the sewer tunnels at the very end and actually kills the one person that the seven sisters couldn't seem to put down themselves.... all in the name of HIS city and how he likes it to be.

Maybe in the next series or trilogy that continues this book you can elaborate on how this comes to be. Possibly chat with EC and EG and ask their advice on this outcome.

Your fan,
CEV
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 02 Dec 2009 :  15:45:46  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Good question, CEV.

Firstly, yes, it's quite possible--even likely--that Elaith did know all about it, or at least some of it. I want to note that there is no indication either way that Elaith does or does not know about the happenings in this book. There are whole levels of intrigue I did not go into--you think the Blackstaff didn't notice the magical chaos after the revel scene? (In fact, it's even cited at one point that the lord wizard did indeed comment on those events.)

Secondly, even if Elaith (or any other high level NPC for that matter) did know about it, that doesn't necessarily mean that he would actually do anything about it. Elaith is only one person, and he's got all his own stuff to deal with. Shadowbane and his involved allies/enemies doesn't represent a city-shaking threat--there were no assassination attempts against the major power structure or reckless destruction of property (excepting Myrin's magic storm after the revel scene, as previously noted). So it isn't necessarily clear why Elaith would even bother. If you waste your time on every random adventurer who comes breezing through town, you never get any real work done.

Thirdly, I have no idea if Elaith survived the spellplague or the 100 years since his last appearance. Remember, City of Splendors was set in the 1370s, and Downshadow is set in 1479. He might be dead, he might have retired and settled for a goodly long life with all his carefully amassed wealth and influence, or he might still be in the thick of it. It's open to speculation: some of the thugs may be working for Elaith in the novel--Lilten (Fayne's Patron) may even be Elaith's business partner or have succeeded him as a crimelord in the city (Lilten may be a little reminiscent of Elaith, but rest assured, they are *not* the same character; for one thing, Lilten is much, *much* older than Elaith). Point is, I don't know what's up with Elaith in 1479 FR, and I'd prefer Ed or Elaine to reveal that, rather than myself.

Fourthly, I consider Elaith a signature character of the aforementioned writers (E&E), and it is doubtful I would ever directly use him without express permission and deep consultation. Even then, he would only play a minor role in a novel written by me. This is simply because 1) I respect both Ed and Elaine very deeply, 2) I would be concerned about portraying him responsibly and accurately, and 3) devoted fans such as yourself would boil me in green slime if I got him wrong.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Woah! I just realized that Fayne is daughter of Cythara and Graz'zt!?

"You make an intriguing offer, one that is very tempting. It would seem that I have little alternative than to answer thusly: DISINTEGRATE!" Vaarsuvius, Order of the Stick 625
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quote:
Originally posted by skychrome

Woah! I just realized that Fayne is daughter of Cythara and Graz'zt!?
Certainly is an intriguing possibility, isn't it?

More on this to be revealed at a later date.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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quote:
Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie

quote:
Originally posted by skychrome

Woah! I just realized that Fayne is daughter of Cythara and Graz'zt!?
Certainly is an intriguing possibility, isn't it?

More on this to be revealed at a later date.

Cheers



Hopefully!! I saw a few days ago how you get praised on Gleemax, so it is really difficult for me to understand why WoTC hasn't assigned you new novels yet!
I'd especially favor a trilogy so you can finally close more story threads than open new ones (the only thing that always bothered me about your novels).
And I am still longing for this extrensive Fox-series...


"You make an intriguing offer, one that is very tempting. It would seem that I have little alternative than to answer thusly: DISINTEGRATE!" Vaarsuvius, Order of the Stick 625
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Good afternoon!
I just finished Downshadow a couple of days ago. I just wanted to say I enjoyed it completely! It is unlike any other Realms novel I have read to date. (I still have many to go, but have been reading them almost 20 years) It was very gritty, and I found that refreshing. There are few FR stories that revolve around a Non-RSE or close to. Fayne had me guessing right until the end. Kalen is very well developed and an awesome character concept. I must add that there are few stories that I have read post-1385 that I found interesting. (yes I am one of those), but this one kept me glued right till the end! Thank you very much for giving us this great story. Bravo!

Long live 1384 and that which came before....!!!
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Oh BTW I LOVED the Avaereene cameo! Question....is The Sightless the new incarnation of The Eye?

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skychrome
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quote:
Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie

quote:
Originally posted by skychrome

Woah! I just realized that Fayne is daughter of Cythara and Graz'zt!?
Certainly is an intriguing possibility, isn't it?

More on this to be revealed at a later date.

Cheers



Uh, another thing just crossed my mind: Fayne = Belyara?

"You make an intriguing offer, one that is very tempting. It would seem that I have little alternative than to answer thusly: DISINTEGRATE!" Vaarsuvius, Order of the Stick 625
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 15 Mar 2010 :  01:11:29  Show Profile  Visit Erik Scott de Bie's Homepage Send Erik Scott de Bie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hey guys, thanks for the kind words, and yes, I hope to give you more about these characters in the future.

@skychrome: Yeah, I leave loose ends, because the characters' stories just aren't finished, and I want to write more about them. Shadowbane, Twilight, Fayne, Myrin . . . there's going to be more about them someday. I'm confident, and you should be too!

@EoHR: Yes, in my conception, the Sightless is the new incarnation of the Eye. Not that it's officially canonical, but it's implied: they are called the Sightless after the Xanathar perished in the course of the Spellplague, and Avaereene seized control of the guild. That doesn't mean, however, that the Xanathar isn't still around--possibly as a death tyrant.

Also, I wouldn't bet on having figured Fayne out. I fully intend on surprising you.

@skychrome: Oh, Fayne is definitely herself--I'm not hiding somebody in her form. She might be someone more important than she otherwise seems, but she's definitely an original character.

You can also check out Fayne in the forthcoming RPGA-ish D&D Encounters program, the first adventure of which I wrote: http://wizards.com/dnd/Event.aspx?x=dnd/4new/event/dndencounters

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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Acolyte

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Cause an Elder Orb wasnt bad enough....lets make him a Death Tyrant! Love it! (I know that isnt NECESSARILY what you are saying. But I still like it) :)

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quote:
Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie

You can also check out Fayne in the forthcoming RPGA-ish D&D Encounters program, the first adventure of which I wrote: http://wizards.com/dnd/Event.aspx?x=dnd/4new/event/dndencounters



I saw Fayne's name pass in a mail about the program.
I haven't played it yet, and I likely won't soon. I sadly don't have the time to play every week.
Maybe I'll get someone to run if in a marathon session at some point in the future.
I would, as a player, be a bit wary having my PC get hired by Fayne though...

Gomez
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quote:
Originally posted by gomez

quote:
Originally posted by Erik Scott de Bie

You can also check out Fayne in the forthcoming RPGA-ish D&D Encounters program, the first adventure of which I wrote: http://wizards.com/dnd/Event.aspx?x=dnd/4new/event/dndencounters



I saw Fayne's name pass in a mail about the program.
I haven't played it yet, and I likely won't soon. I sadly don't have the time to play every week.
Yeah, I know how that goes. Fortunately . . .
quote:
Maybe I'll get someone to run if in a marathon session at some point in the future.
It seems to hold up pretty well as an actual adventure to be played all in a row. The only conceptual difference between the Encounters adventure and, say, Keep on the Shadowfell is that the Encounters is maybe a bit more linear--i.e., it works to keep players running through the same encounter on the same day. If you snagged the campaign for your own use outside the program, however, you could seriously expand it and do all sorts of fun stuff! And there are indeed a number of outlying story threads you can pick up. I highly recommend giving it a shot, if you can snag a copy.

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I would, as a player, be a bit wary having my PC get hired by Fayne though...
Heh heh. It's fun to see people who have never heard of her, who just have no idea what they're in for, and who fall for the dumb blonde act. I've seen a number of comments that are like, "why is she such a ditz?" or "man, she's really over the top!"

Ah, to be a shapechanging con artist.

Cheers

Erik Scott de Bie

'Tis easier to destroy than to create.

Author of a number of Realms novels (GHOSTWALKER, DEPTHS OF MADNESS, and the SHADOWBANE series), contributor to the NEVERWINTER CAMPAIGN GUIDE and SHADOWFELL: GLOOMWROUGHT AND BEYOND, Twitch DM of the Dungeon Scrawlers, currently playing "The Westgate Irregulars"
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