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Screensize: 640 x 480 800 x 600 1024 x 768 1280 x 1024 UserName: Password: Format Mode: Basic  Help  Prompt  Format: Font Andale Mono Arial Arial Black Book Antiqua Century Gothic Comic Sans MS Courier New Georgia Impact Lucida Console Script MT Bold Stencil Tahoma Times New Roman Trebuchet MS Verdana   Size 1 2 3 4 5 6   Color Black Red Yellow Pink Green Orange Purple Blue Beige Brown Teal Navy Maroon LimeGreen Message: * HTML is OFF * Forum Code is ON Smilies [quote][i]Originally posted by varyar[/i] [br]Hello all! I recently finished the first draft of a potential DMs Guild book about the forest that will later be called Cormanthor during the First Flowering, specifically the 'primitive' green and dark elves who inhabit the great forest c. -17,000 DR. (I know that's speculative and not rooted in the lore - at least none that I've read.) I could really use some fresh sets of eyes to take a look at the book and help me improve it however possible. For instance: While working on the text of my [i]next[/i] potential DMs Guild book, I realized the gap between Cormyr (the western edge of future-Cormanthor) and the elf kingdoms of the 'Sword Coast' was only a few hundred miles, which makes the presented deep isolation of the Cormanthor elves from their kin to the west a little odd. That's the kind of thing I'd really appreciate feedback on. If you're interested, please let me know, and I'll send you a link to the text on Google Documents. Thanks and have a great day! [/quote]   Check here to include your profile signature. Check here to subscribe to this topic.