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varyar
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Posted - 26 Feb 2024 :  12:38:17  Show Profile  Visit varyar's Homepage Send varyar a Private Message  Reply with Quote  Delete Topic
Hello all!

I recently finished the first draft of a potential DMs Guild book about the forest that will later be called Cormanthor during the First Flowering, specifically the 'primitive' green and dark elves who inhabit the great forest c. -17,000 DR. (I know that's speculative and not rooted in the lore - at least none that I've read.)

I could really use some fresh sets of eyes to take a look at the book and help me improve it however possible.

For instance: While working on the text of my next potential DMs Guild book, I realized the gap between Cormyr (the western edge of future-Cormanthor) and the elf kingdoms of the 'Sword Coast' was only a few hundred miles, which makes the presented deep isolation of the Cormanthor elves from their kin to the west a little odd.

That's the kind of thing I'd really appreciate feedback on. If you're interested, please let me know, and I'll send you a link to the text on Google Documents.

Thanks and have a great day!

Out Now on the DMs Guild:

Cormanthor: The First Flowering:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/502169/Cormanthor-The-First-Flowering

Leira the Mistshadow:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/493852/Leira-the-Mistshadow

Vandria Gilmadrith, Lady of Grief:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/481871/Vandria-Gilmadrith-Lady-of-Grief

varyar
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137 Posts

Posted - 27 Feb 2024 :  19:08:04  Show Profile  Visit varyar's Homepage Send varyar a Private Message  Reply with Quote
That's true - thanks!

I'll work with that, plus the mountains are full of dragons (lead by one apparently unaffected by any Rage of Dragons), I think.

Out Now on the DMs Guild:

Cormanthor: The First Flowering:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/502169/Cormanthor-The-First-Flowering

Leira the Mistshadow:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/493852/Leira-the-Mistshadow

Vandria Gilmadrith, Lady of Grief:
https://www.dmsguild.com/product/481871/Vandria-Gilmadrith-Lady-of-Grief
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