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| varyar |
Posted - 26 Feb 2024 : 12:38:17
Hello all!
I recently finished the first draft of a potential DMs Guild book about the forest that will later be called Cormanthor during the First Flowering, specifically the 'primitive' green and dark elves who inhabit the great forest c. -17,000 DR. (I know that's speculative and not rooted in the lore - at least none that I've read.)
I could really use some fresh sets of eyes to take a look at the book and help me improve it however possible.
For instance: While working on the text of my next potential DMs Guild book, I realized the gap between Cormyr (the western edge of future-Cormanthor) and the elf kingdoms of the 'Sword Coast' was only a few hundred miles, which makes the presented deep isolation of the Cormanthor elves from their kin to the west a little odd.
That's the kind of thing I'd really appreciate feedback on. If you're interested, please let me know, and I'll send you a link to the text on Google Documents.
Thanks and have a great day! |
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| varyar |
Posted - 27 Feb 2024 : 19:08:04
That's true - thanks!
I'll work with that, plus the mountains are full of dragons (lead by one apparently unaffected by any Rage of Dragons), I think. |
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