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Charles Phipps
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Mace Hammerhand
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 00:18:02
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
It's about speaking to the soul.
Drunk people aside, although they do kinda have the same language once they start slurring, how would, for example, a hill billy southern baptist who most definitely claims to be a christian and of course knows no other language other than English...how would he communicate with a greek orthodox from Romania who doesn't speak English?
I'd like to see them speak to their souls.
With alignment lingo you got exactly that. |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 00:26:30
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I don't get your objection.
They would because the alignment language is universe to all good beings.
They may not be able to speak it but they will understand it.
Angels would speak it and presumably the Apostles did in tongues.
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Mace Hammerhand
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 00:40:37
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Sort of like an alignment babel fish?
And no, it is not universAL to all good beings as there was an alignment language for ALL 9 alignments. So if a holy dude had an alignment of neutral good and the angel spoke lawful good, too bad for the holy dude...not a word is understood...
And as far as I remember, and I love watching movies on Exorcism, speaking in tongues is an indication for possession-- to the fire with him!
Sorry...too tired and thus too cranky to really get into this alignment lingo discussion |
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TymoraChosen
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quote: 1. The Shades of 'Return of the Archwizards' more or less get everything they want except destroy all of Faerun. Everveska is utterly decimated while the Phaerimm (I know I didn't spell that right) have also been nearly destroyed....thus having two of their enemies nearly destroy one another. They also more or less have conquered the entirety of the great desert that is a massive piece of the country.
The shades do have the right to reclaim their rightful land of Anauroch which is their rightful home. Though they attempted to ruin Faerun, I don't see how they had achieved anything much. They lost heavily in the recent war against the Phaerimm, the Tilverton incident and the city damaged with some princes lost. So I don't see they had achieved anything much, even their foothold on Anauroch is not stabilized yet.
quote: 2. Malik I mentioned before
Malik is nothing more than a lackey of Cyric. Not decisive enough.
quote: 3. Death of the Dragon utterly decimates Cormyr, which was the entire goal of the villain. Azoun is dead at the end of the novel, the country is in shambles, the heir is also dead, and most of the dread armies is crushed. It's certainly as good as Thrawn is.
Azoun IV is dead, that is certainly very good news. Though the devil dragon and the dread armies had destroyed much of the armies of Cormyr and ruined Arabel, they had not struck the critical governmental and monarchy structure-which is necessary for the destabilization of the whole country- for they had not eliminated Queen Filfaeril, Alusair and Azoun V and this means the dread armies had not achieved anything worthwhile besides slaying Azoun IV. Alusair's determination will quell the current political firestorm anyway.
quote: 4. Shandril is killed in book 3 of her trilogy, thus fulfilling the goal of Fzoul and the Red Wizards.
Her death is absolutely necessary and sooner or later she will die by the hands of good or evil. Even some of the Chosen of Mystra were secretly joyous and smug about her passing anyway. The Red Wizards, Fzoul and the Chosen all wield great power of their own and they will do anything necessary to remove anybody who had the power like Shandril so as to maintain their "superpower" status and image to the common folk. For people who wield power do not suffer anybody sharing it or having more of it than them.
quote: 5. King Obould wins at the end of the Orcs trilogy doesn't he? He may have lost some troops and been humiliated by Drizzt but he's conquered a vast swath of territory hasn't he?
Win? He only win a undefined swath of territory that is barren and worthless and the Kingdom of Obould is not accepted by anybody nor is the borders defined and accepted. Sooner or later, some great dragon flight will lay waste to Obould's Kingdom anyway.
quote: 6. The War of the Spider Queen is again....victory for evil.
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Winterfox
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 09:25:57
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
It's about speaking to the soul.
It's about a crappy RPG device that overlooks anything remotely like realism, intellect, actual linguistics, and... you know. Those terribly trivial things.
I'm kinda glad now that I was never acquainted with the 1st edition. |
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EytanBernstein
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 14:34:37
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quote: Originally posted by Richard Lee Byers
1st Edition obviously didn't have a lot of the bells and whistles that came later, but I've played every edition of D&D and a number of other RPGs also, and it's my opinion that the balance of roleplaying vs. wargaming that emerges from any given campaign is always more a matter of the inclinations of the GM and players than of the rules.
This is something I've been trying to tell some of my old gaming buddies for years. They'll complain that the system detracts from roleplaying, doesn't let them do what they want, let's players do too much, and any number of other excuses. I always tell them that the way they run their game, the rules they choose to use, the power levels they set, and the style they encourage is entirely a voluntary thing. The game doesn't make those decisions for you or force you to play a certain way. Being hamstringed by a system is entirely a psychological problem. |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 15:42:26
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[quote=Winterfox]It's about a crappy RPG device that overlooks anything remotely like realism, intellect, actual linguistics, and... you know. Those terribly trivial things.
I'm kinda glad now that I was never acquainted with the 1st edition.[/quote]
What does any of that have to do with alignment speech? Why would a speech composed of words that resonate with one's SOUL require linguistics? Do you have no imagination man?
I prefer my gameworlds a tad more magical.
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Erik Scott de Bie
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 16:03:15
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Totally off topic, but. . .
quote: I could also see Halistra appearing again, Lolth's inquisitor, fun stuff...wonder how long she'd survive. In that regard Lolth proved truly chaotic, she didn't even give Halistra specific orders whom to kill and where, at least Cyric's inquisitors had an area to play in, Zhentil Keep, Halistra could show up anywhere where people despise Lolth and that might mean she's have to deal with Qilué. And her torment of knowing how majorly she screwed up... good stuff
I suppose this title is a very minor War of the Spider Queen spoiler, but. . .
WotSQ SPOILER
Lisa Smedman has announced her next trilogy, called The Lady Penitent, its first book being Sacrifice of the Widow. It stars Halisstra, post War of the Spider Queen.
Thomas Reid is also presumably writing a trilogy about Alizsa (probably misspelled) and Kanyr Vhok, which may have Pharaun -- in one form or another.
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Mace Hammerhand
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 16:17:07
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
[quote=Winterfox]It's about a crappy RPG device that overlooks anything remotely like realism, intellect, actual linguistics, and... you know. Those terribly trivial things.
I'm kinda glad now that I was never acquainted with the 1st edition.
What does any of that have to do with alignment speech? Why would a speech composed of words that resonate with one's SOUL require linguistics? Do you have no imagination man?
I prefer my gameworlds a tad more magical.
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This so derails the topic, Charles, if you wanna discuss alignment languages please open a new thread, I will be very happy to join in  |
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Wooly Rupert
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 17:24:33
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quote: Originally posted by Mace Hammerhand
This so derails the topic, Charles, if you wanna discuss alignment languages please open a new thread, I will be very happy to join in 
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Mace Hammerhand
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 21:51:03
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And now for something completely different...
Villains
anyone any new input? What makes a villain tick, that's always been of interest to me. And I don't mean it in the way of all *insert random ethnic group* are evil and have to be *insert random method of ethic cleansing* evil... |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 22:30:18
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quote: Originally posted by Mace Hammerhand
And now for something completely different...
Villains
anyone any new input? What makes a villain tick, that's always been of interest to me. And I don't mean it in the way of all *insert random ethnic group* are evil and have to be *insert random method of ethic cleansing* evil...
For me, the function of a villain is to be reprehensible on some level. A villain is, without this quality, on some level just is another character. This is also the difference between antagonists and villain. A villain exists to offend the reader's sensibilities and to do things that the reader desire to be either A. Punished or B. Stopped.
Thus, you can't have a villain that you want to win without failing on some level. Sometimes there are exceptions of course; Richard the Third is about a story from the villain's perspective with the audience expected to enjoy Richard destroying the lives of those around him while Shylock the Jew has always been an unusual case where the audience almost invariably considers him a figure of pity rather than one of loathing. |
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Richard Lee Byers
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Posted - 20 Mar 2006 : 23:40:57
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So, Charles, in your eyes, do stories with a true villain have an edge over stories that simply feature an antagonist, a guy who opposes the hero but is not inherently despicable? |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 01:13:05
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I'm a professional writer too as my job (even if my novels have only been released on Amazon.com last week) so I speak from what I know. It's really a question of what kind of story you're looking for rather than any inherent superiority of one over the other.
Sauron in the LOTR is important because he represents pure evil without any admirable qualities whatsoever, same for Emperor Palpatine, or the Devil for example. If the Emperor had some redeeming quality he'd be a lesser villain.
Even more structured villains like the Daleks from Doctor who and the Orcs from LOTR are essentially "pure" evil with Daleks being hate personified and racial purity, Orcs being savagery personified. They wouldn't be as threatening with their villainy 'diluted'
On the other hand, there's reasons that people like the Red Baron stick with us and villains with softer qualities.
If I had to choose between one, I'd probably choose villains over antagonists because they imply a stronger urgency to the victory of the hero. |
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Wooly Rupert
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 01:54:13
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
Sauron in the LOTR is important because he represents pure evil without any admirable qualities whatsoever, same for Emperor Palpatine, or the Devil for example. If the Emperor had some redeeming quality he'd be a lesser villain.
Actually...
I've only read a few of the Star Wars novels, so I don't know if this has been revealed in more than just Outbound Flight. But in that novel (by Timothy Zahn, the guy that gave us Thrawn, who is also in this book), we do see a redeeming quality in Palpatine. I'll not offer any spoilers, but I will say that part of the reason he took over and formed the Empire is because of a reason that many people -- even within the Star Wars galaxy -- would have supported.
Note that I said the reason would have been supported. He certainly could have done things a different way, but at least one part of his goal was a good one.
Anyway, a villain that is pure evil with no redeeming qualities is, to me, a shallow and uninteresting villain. In the LotR trilogy, Sauron was just kinda there. Sauruman, at least, had some personality. He was a much more enjoyable villain. Sauron was just a faceless evil -- a shadow of a villain, if you will. Shadows may be dark and frightening, but they are also flat and two-dimensional. It's the three-dimensional entity that's more interesting, not the two-dimensional one. |
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Winterfox
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 02:44:54
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
Sauron in the LOTR is important because he represents pure evil without any admirable qualities whatsoever, same for Emperor Palpatine, or the Devil for example. If the Emperor had some redeeming quality he'd be a lesser villain.
"The Devil" from where? Earlier upthread, I brought up Milton's Satan, and that is anything but "pure evil," regardless of th poet's intention. And I agree with Wooly: Sauron bored me. He neither interested, intrigued, nor menaced. He was just there as a vague threat. Mind you, I've problems with Tolkien's characterization in general -- Middle-earth could have imploded and everyone could have died and I wouldn't give a damn. Palpatine didn't interest me much, either; Revan, Ulic Qel-Droma and the like piqued my curiosity far more.
quote: Even more structured villains like the Daleks from Doctor who and the Orcs from LOTR are essentially "pure" evil with Daleks being hate personified and racial purity, Orcs being savagery personified. They wouldn't be as threatening with their villainy 'diluted'
I disagree. I find villains that can be understood on a human level much scarier than "pure evil." Especially if I am shown that said villains have complex, intelligent, sentient reasons for what they do that are deeper than being evil just because.
quote: If I had to choose between one, I'd probably choose villains over antagonists because they imply a stronger urgency to the victory of the hero.
*shrugs* Whatever floats your boat, I suppose. I'll stick with stories that are less absolute, thanks. |
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Richard Lee Byers
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 03:28:53
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I've seen it argued that even though he never really even hauls his spectral, malevolent butt onstage, Sauron is characterized in the sense that he's defined by the attributes of his stooges and home turf: the coarse brutality of the orcs, the cold, joyless evil of the Nazgul, the cunning and self-serving rationalization of Saruman, the desolation of Mordor, and what have you. |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 04:31:56
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quote: I've only read a few of the Star Wars novels, so I don't know if this has been revealed in more than just Outbound Flight. But in that novel (by Timothy Zahn, the guy that gave us Thrawn, who is also in this book), we do see a redeeming quality in Palpatine. I'll not offer any spoilers, but I will say that part of the reason he took over and formed the Empire is because of a reason that many people -- even within the Star Wars galaxy -- would have supported.
I interpret that scene as merely Palpatine lying to Thrawn. It demeans and undercuts the films because Palpatine is willing to commit widescale genocide on an unbelievable scale for power for what people assume is 'good reasons' in that interpretation. Frankly, I just assume Palpatine knew about them but merely considered them rivals for what he was going to do anyway.
Certainly, Palpatine in Dark Empire expressed his vision that he preferred the galaxy burn with his death rather than carry on.
Weirdly, the "Threat from Beyond" adds layers to Thrawn and even Revan but I think it makes Palpatine look too much like a puppet compared to the menace of the Vong.
quote: "The Devil" from where? Earlier upthread, I brought up Milton's Satan, and that is anything but "pure evil," regardless of th poet's intention. And I agree with Wooly: Sauron bored me. He neither interested, intrigued, nor menaced. He was just there as a vague threat. Mind you, I've problems with Tolkien's characterization in general -- Middle-earth could have imploded and everyone could have died and I wouldn't give a damn. Palpatine didn't interest me much, either; Revan, Ulic Qel-Droma and the like piqued my curiosity far more.
Milton's Satan rebels against Paradise, destroys Adam and Eve, and attempts to marr creation solely for Pride and Vanity. He never displays any qualities that could remotely be considered positive other than his beauty and charisma. People tend to misinterpret likeable with genuine positive qualities. However, if you like I'll use Zorastrianism's Ahriman.
For me, the problem with Ulic is that the work attempts to make me sympathize with him. There's something vaguely offensive to me about works that think I should honestly care about the 'tragic' circumstances that lead a man to scour the galaxy and enslave it. Exar Kun was a figure that I have sympathy for as much as Ulic. He ends up punished horrendously for 4000 years before his destruction while Ulic goes off to brood.
I accept Ulics and Darth Vader's redemptions but give me an honest villain whom will go unrepetently into the night.
quote: I disagree. I find villains that can be understood on a human level much scarier than "pure evil." Especially if I am shown that said villains have complex, intelligent, sentient reasons for what they do that are deeper than being evil just because.
The problem is that this easily verges into nauseating attempts to justify the behavior of certain characters I find too often. I can understand the Master from Doctor Who on a human level. He's arrogant, greedy, vain, power hungry, and considers all other people around him utterly like insects more than he does consider them like people. He has many positive qualities like intelligence, civility, and a genteel manner. He's a throughly engaging character. Never once do I find the story attempting to say the Master isn't a monster for attempting to dominate the universe with a weapon that can destroy any planet in the universe instantly.
I consider it a failure when Authors essentially become so enamoured of their characters that they become a second protagionist. There's plenty of good antagonist leads (like Char Anzable for anyone who knows anime) but you have the potential to drain a character of all menace by justifying him (Anne Rice and Lestat).
A villain also that is 'thoroughly evil' and 'inhuman' also has to represent something. The Daleks are effective because they don't have to be human to appeal to the human fears about tyranny, racism, Nazism , and the like. No, you aren't going to have much in the way of a story about why its a good thing for Daleks to butcher all other races but you have plenty of fire to explore the story through characters reactions to these individuals.
For a character to fight a 'monster' you don't necessarily have to have the monster just be a video game target.
(Monsters are different from villains in that Monsters are inhuman on some level)
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Richard Lee Byers
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 05:27:33
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There's a distinction between making the villain understandable and credible and justifying him, I think. You can do the former without the latter. |
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 05:28:37
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
Milton's Satan rebels against Paradise, destroys Adam and Eve, and attempts to marr creation solely for Pride and Vanity. He never displays any qualities that could remotely be considered positive other than his beauty and charisma.
Oh, I don't know. He's the one character in the story who appears able to think for himself. Milton's God may blather about giving his creations free will, but ultimately boils down to "Love and obey me or be punished, bitches!" God's egotistic, narcissistic, and condescending. Besides, without Satan, wouldn't said creations be locked into stasis for all eternity, singing hymns and working the garden? Sounds awful to me. No change, no growth, no anything.
quote: The problem is that this easily verges into nauseating attempts to justify the behavior of certain characters I find too often. I can understand the Master from Doctor Who on a human level. He's arrogant, greedy, vain, power hungry, and considers all other people around him utterly like insects more than he does consider them like people. He has many positive qualities like intelligence, civility, and a genteel manner. He's a throughly engaging character. Never once do I find the story attempting to say the Master isn't a monster for attempting to dominate the universe with a weapon that can destroy any planet in the universe instantly.
Uhhm, what? Who said anything about justification? As I said, understandable qualities. Three-dimensional characters. That's all I ask for. People who decry three-dimensional antagonists tend to use a straw man argument: make them complex and you "justify" their evil, how offensive! I can't help but feel there's a leap of illogic somewhere, here.
quote: I consider it a failure when Authors essentially become so enamoured of their characters that they become a second protagionist. There's plenty of good antagonist leads (like Char Anzable for anyone who knows anime) but you have the potential to drain a character of all menace by justifying him (Anne Rice and Lestat).
Yes, well, uhm, wasn't Lestat always a protagonist? You could say he wasn't in Interview, but that's one book in how many out of the Vampire Chronicles? Not that I don't think Anne Rice is a batty insane lady, but that's neither here nor there.
But eh, whatever. Preferences, preferences. I like my fiction with people who happen to be pursuing different goals rather than bold dividing line between hero and villain. There's a reason GRRM sells, you know? |
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 05:37:24
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I dunno, I think we need to leave this discussion about god/satan/etc out of this since it has really nothing to do with FR.
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Mace Hammerhand
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 08:57:05
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
For me, the problem with Ulic is that the work attempts to make me sympathize with him. There's something vaguely offensive to me about works that think I should honestly care about the 'tragic' circumstances that lead a man to scour the galaxy and enslave it. Exar Kun was a figure that I have sympathy for as much as Ulic. He ends up punished horrendously for 4000 years before his destruction while Ulic goes off to brood.
I accept Ulics and Darth Vader's redemptions but give me an honest villain whom will go unrepetently into the night.
*and snnnipppp*
The problem is that this easily verges into nauseating attempts to justify the behavior of certain characters I find too often. I can understand the Master from Doctor Who on a human level. He's arrogant, greedy, vain, power hungry, and considers all other people around him utterly like insects more than he does consider them like people. He has many positive qualities like intelligence, civility, and a genteel manner. He's a throughly engaging character. Never once do I find the story attempting to say the Master isn't a monster for attempting to dominate the universe with a weapon that can destroy any planet in the universe instantly.
I consider it a failure when Authors essentially become so enamoured of their characters that they become a second protagionist. There's plenty of good antagonist leads (like Char Anzable for anyone who knows anime) but you have the potential to drain a character of all menace by justifying him (Anne Rice and Lestat).
A villain also that is 'thoroughly evil' and 'inhuman' also has to represent something. The Daleks are effective because they don't have to be human to appeal to the human fears about tyranny, racism, Nazism , and the like. No, you aren't going to have much in the way of a story about why its a good thing for Daleks to butcher all other races but you have plenty of fire to explore the story through characters reactions to these individuals.
For a character to fight a 'monster' you don't necessarily have to have the monster just be a video game target.
(Monsters are different from villains in that Monsters are inhuman on some level)
Charles, Charles, Charles... *heavy sigh* A failure? Of authors? To glorify the personality of their character after all... I mean come ON. Lestat is after all the main character of the Vampire chronicles. His story is the premise for these books. Without him we wouldn't have these wonderful, intriguing stories.
In this case Lestat is the protagonist. Sure he is a vampire, but so what? Sure he sucks blood, after all he is a vampire.
A thoroughly evil villain represents something... as others in this thread have already pointed out, a two dimensional character is ... well two dimensional. 
You claim you are a professional writer, good for you. Yet you also say that it is wrong to give a villain or antagonist a reason that he only is there to provide a threat to the hero. Kinda clichee don't you think? Bad for you.
Try to broaden your (from what I can tell) narrow horizon. You do not have to start g(l)orify a villain. (To make a villain understandable does NOT mean to make others believe that his actions are right.) If you understand a villain and his actions he does become more frightening, because the reader CAN relate and see that under the right circumstances (or wrong circumstances) he or she would've behaved in a similar way.
I'd call it quite naive to claim that to make a villain understandable is to invite others to do the same. Your posts basically define you as a decently intelligent being, yet you claim there is only black and white... curious.
A priest of Tyr who forces every other sentient being to accept his faith or die would fall out of your concept because he is both.
You keep referring to characters of fiction that are two dimensional. How about trying to read about a fully realized villain and being frightened of why he does it? The big, unseen, bad, shadowshrouded being in the background is half as frightening as the goon who knows he consciously made that choice because it was the only way to get back at a society that, in his eyes, only existed to torment him.
I do not mean redeeming qualities, and I assume that neither does anyone else on this forum, but understanable reasons for a bad guy. |
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 09:10:35
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
I'm a professional writer too as my job (even if my novels have only been released on Amazon.com last week) so I speak from what I know. It's really a question of what kind of story you're looking for rather than any inherent superiority of one over the other.
*snipping*
On the other hand, there's reasons that people like the Red Baron stick with us and villains with softer qualities.
If I had to choose between one, I'd probably choose villains over antagonists because they imply a stronger urgency to the victory of the hero.
To claim Manfred von Richthofen was a villain is curious, to say the least. In my opinion, and probably that of every historian who is worth his title, he was a soldier doing his job. Same as any other soldier.
And to say that two dimensional villain or antagonist provides a stronger urgency for the hero is, again, naive. Only because we the readers know what makes the bad guy tick, does not in any way, shape or bloody form make his threat any less. Rather the opposite. If I can see the mission, message, goal of the bad guy has some 'twisted' appeal I want the hero to succeed even more. |
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Charles Phipps
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 14:31:56
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Err Mace, I'll respond when you realize that I used The "Red Baron" as an Example of a Good Antagionist and a representative of a character who is not evil but is opposing the other side.
Given you didn't get that, I don't know if you really can be responded to for anything else (admittedly, the wording could be clearer but I mentioned it earlier as an antagonist). My "villains with softer qualities" wasn't meant to refer to him per say but I was watching Doctor Who at the time so what not.
As for Lestat, I didn't like the second book since the transformation of him from "the avatar of evil" From Louis' books to misunderstood rock god really sent the series spiralling down hill for me.
Honestly, your entire argument is built around the implications that "pure evil" villains are going to be cartoon cutouts when frankly there's no implications they are.
Your aforementioned 'priest of Tyr who forces every other sentient being to accept his faith or die' is evil. Frankly, he actually is one of the character types I would avoid because card carrying fanatics frankly aren't that interesting to right about. There's something fundamentally stupid about such characters and I hate writing about them, though I admit people who want to "save the world" do tend to become constant villains in my stories.
I just have no sympathy for them whatsoever.
In my books, against what I have said here; I usually keep a mixture of villains, antagonists, and irredeemable avatars of evil. Since my writing cred is somewhat on the line an example would be the 'High Priest' character in my first book (specifics like names are irrevelent to the discussion since I doubt anyone has read the work). The character in question cares nothing for what his 'God' is going to do to the rest of the world but he's utterly terrified of death. Likewise, in the sequel, the villain is motivated by his love of his wife and a desire to end death so that he goes to abominable lengths.
Hell, even the "Avatar of Evil" solely wishes to undo creation because its existence is a nightmarish torment so long as it happens. Only when the universe is Chaos again can it be free of its diminished nature and be one with all things again.
There's a place for characters that have admirable qualities as well as villains and certainly its the obligation of a good writer to explain how Villain A got to Point Z where he's a lunatic but give me a character that cannot be reasoned with, dissauded, is a threat to everything the hero loves, and if he triumphs will plunge the galaxy/world/land into darkness.
Plus, there's also something GREAT when you realize that a character is doing something that he knows that society knows is wrong and doesn't care...or even HE knows is wrong but has bigger reasons for it (or personal weakness like greed---Macbeth for example, though he was the protagionist descending to evil and tyranny and didn't reach tat point until the end). The Operative in Serenity didn't do it for personal gain but because of the line response to "I don't kill children." "I do." He's all the more effective and his redemption somewhat lessening.
Oh and just to prove...
http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1590921798/sr=8-2/qid=1142952136/ref=pd_bbs_2/104-1335224-2639920?%5Fencoding=UTF8 http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1590920848/sr=8-1/qid=1142952169/ref=pd_bbs_1/104-1335224-2639920?%5Fencoding=UTF8
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 14:52:55
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
Err Mace, I'll respond when you realize that I used The "Red Baron" as an Example of a Good Antagionist and a representative of a character who is not evil.
Given you didn't get that, I don't know if you really can be responded to for anything else (admittedly, the wording could be clearer but I mentioned it earlier as an antagonist).
As for Lestat, I didn't like the second book since the transformation of him from "the avatar of evil" From Louis' books to misunderstood rock god really sent the series spiralling down hill for me.
Honestly, your entire argument is built around the implications that "pure evil" villains are going to be cartoon cutouts when frankly there's no implications they are.
Your aforementioned 'priest of Tyr who forces every other sentient being to accept his faith or die' is evil. Frankly, he actually is one of the character types I would avoid because card carrying fanatics frankly aren't that interesting to right about. There's something fundamentally stupid about such characters and I hate writing about them, though I admit people who want to "save the world" do tend to become constant villains in my stories.
I just have no sympathy for them whatsoever.
In my books, against what I have said here; I usually keep a mixture of villains, antagonists, and irredeemable avatars of evil. Since my writing cred is somewhat on the line an example would be the 'High Priest' character in my first book (specifics like names are irrevelent to the discussion since I doubt anyone has read the work). The character in question cares nothing for what his 'God' is going to do to the rest of the world but he's utterly terrified of death. Likewise, in the sequel, the villain is motivated by his love of his wife and a desire to end death so that he goes to abominable lengths.
Hell, even the "Avatar of Evil" solely wishes to undo creation because its existence is a nightmarish torment so long as it happens. Only when the universe is Chaos again can it be free of its diminished nature and be one with all things again.
There's a place for characters that have admirable qualities as well as villains and certainly its the obligation of a good writer to explain how Villain A got to Point Z where he's a lunatic but give me a character that cannot be reasoned with, dissauded, is a threat to everything the hero loves, and if he triumphs will plunge the galaxy/world/land into darkness.
http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1590921798/sr=8-2/qid=1142952136/ref=pd_bbs_2/104-1335224-2639920?%5Fencoding=UTF8 http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1590920848/sr=8-1/qid=1142952169/ref=pd_bbs_1/104-1335224-2639920?%5Fencoding=UTF8
How come I had to reply to the post to actually read the entire thing???
As you already stated your sentence was awkwardly structured and thus prone to misunderstanding.
Curious...now they are both there (edited into the post) |
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 15:09:19
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Hmmm to clarify my position FYI...
There's all sorts of characters in books and writing for the hero to oppose.
Antagonists which we all pretty much agree on the definition of. The Baron Mannfried defintion of just being a soldier on the other side of the war. A person whom happens to be working at opposite ends of the player as well. Boromir when he goes for the ring is hardly an enemy in that he wants to save his people either, though the book paints the act in a horrifically bad light.
Villains- A rather wide range of character type but yes is someone whom possesses some aspect to them that's despicable and disgusting. A Villain can range from a otherwise noble character with a tragic flaw that drives him to horrible actions (Anakin Skywalker who becomes Darth Vader for example) or he can be a corrupt and veneel evildoer through and through (say, Buffalo Bill from SOTL).
Monsters- I'd like to add as an another definition entirely. Monsters are characters that verge from villains in human points. A Monster is a character that has a fundamental disconnect from humanity on some level. Emperor Palpatine seems to have no human qualities whatsoever. Sauron, though originally supposedly some good thing has instead become evil itself. The Daleks who represent the incarnation of the idea of Nazism. Orcs as savagery.
To use a dubious example, Buffy often used Demons as metaphors for various aspects of life to great effect.
Mace Hammerhead is right that there's plenty to be enjoyed in antagonists and villains with lots of nuance and depth, I'm hardly arguing that point. I am going to argue that monsters and villains with very little the audience is expected to sympathize with aren't bad either though.
For me, the appeal of monsters is that they're somewhat alien and divorced from human context. There's a certain bit of mystery to them really and they invoke fears of aspects of even if they really are different entirely. The creature from Alien for example could be looked at as merely an animal lifeform that's living out its lifecycle. There's something about it though that transcends such. Like the Werewolf, its not about becoming a wolf but becoming a beast. Part of the appeal is the mystery really. We don't know WHY Palpatine became such a thorough evil doer but he is.
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Posted - 21 Mar 2006 : 15:35:42
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quote: Originally posted by Charles Phipps
Emperor Palpatine seems to have no human qualities whatsoever.
That is, beyond his own will to power...
quote: We don't know WHY Palpatine became such a thorough evil doer but he is.
I would say that both Epis. III (film and novelisation) and Dark Lord both provide us with a unique but basic insight into why Palpatine was the person he eventually become.
There is mystery, yes. But that mystery only forms the subtle undertone of Palpatine's own transformation into an instrument of the Dark Side... the ultimate expression of his human desire for control and power.
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