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The Defence Minister
Learned Scribe

United Kingdom
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Posted - 09 Dec 2002 :  17:10:41  Show Profile  Visit The Defence Minister's Homepage Send The Defence Minister a Private Message  Reply with Quote  Delete Topic
I know I promised you all a story but until I've finished it you'll have to make do with a poem I have composed inspired by my avatar :

The End of an Age

The King sat upon his golden throne,
Beneath the starry sky,
And here upon this very thone,
Is where he shall soon die.

Gems and gold of priceless cost,
Lay strewn around his feet,
But soon this very ground shall be,
Where wise men go to weep.

For, although the King dost know it not,
There is a plan afoot,
An evil plan of death and pain,
In which the King's life will be took.

He raises his goblet to his lips,
Unaware at the arrow sailing to his chest,
To late he heres the desparate screams,
As it thuds into his breast.

He falls backwards, backwards, ever backwards,
Til his head does hit the hardened stone,
And as he roles down to the floor,
He gives a final groan.

So as you lay in your bed tonight,
Here in Candlekeep,
Spare a thought for the departed king,
And don't be afraid to weep.

TDM

- TDM (Candlekeep's most popular, experienced and handsome member)

Edited by - The Defence Minister on 09 Dec 2002 17:11:36

Lord Rad
Great Reader

United Kingdom
2080 Posts

Posted - 09 Dec 2002 :  17:18:01  Show Profile  Visit Lord Rad's Homepage Send Lord Rad a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Wow! this is excellent! I love it
Really tragic and shocking!

Great work TDM, dont worry about the story, keep the poems flowing!!

Lord Rad

"What? No, I wasn't reading your module. I was just looking at the pictures"
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Mumadar Ibn Huzal
Master of Realmslore

1338 Posts

Posted - 09 Dec 2002 :  17:27:17  Show Profile Send Mumadar Ibn Huzal a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ehm... TDM... you might want to readjust the signature... otherwise I will not consider you first choice for crappy posts anymore.

<shakes fist at TDM>

This poem is definitely not a crappy post.
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Echon
Senior Scribe

Denmark
422 Posts

Posted - 09 Dec 2002 :  17:37:16  Show Profile  Visit Echon's Homepage Send Echon a Private Message  Reply with Quote
A fine poem. I would not mind more of those.

-Echon

"If others had not been foolish, we should be so."

-William Blake
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Tyreal Nyquis
Acolyte

USA
20 Posts

Posted - 09 Dec 2002 :  22:16:33  Show Profile  Visit Tyreal Nyquis's Homepage Send Tyreal Nyquis a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Truly an enjoyable read, and I hope it is a preview of things to come.

"Spells are highly overrated. I mean, you spend half your life shut up in a dusty tower pouring over unitelligible tomes and for what? A few gloriful moments on the battlefield and a permanent case of eye strain." - Tyreal Ny'quis of Sigil
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