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Gary Dallison
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ksu_bond
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Posted - 30 Apr 2014 : 23:31:22
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| I glanced through it yesterday...and hope to actually read it tonight...for a first issue it looks very very good... |
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Gary Dallison
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Dalor Darden
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Posted - 01 May 2014 : 10:13:28
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Awesome stuff...
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The Old Grey Box and AD&D for me! |
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Gary Dallison
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Gary Dallison
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Baltas
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Posted - 01 May 2014 : 12:24:59
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| Great work! I'm already curious about the second issue, while still reading the first! |
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Zireael
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Gary Dallison
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Gary Dallison
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crazedventurers
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Posted - 04 May 2014 : 07:18:45
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Hi DD
I really like what you have put together and your ambition for more, so please keep at it.
I like the alternate histories as it inspires ideas and gives DM things to drop into their games when nosy players start asking tricky questions about why XX happened here and why YY did not do anything about it.
What made the OGBS come to life for me was Ed's current clack timeline around the Years of the Price and Shadow, so to see that expanded as you have done with Vaasa is encouraging.
Look forward to seeing more great stuff getting published
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So saith Ed. I've never said he was sane, have I? Gods, all this writing and he's running a constant fantasy version of Coronation Street in his head, too. . shudder, love to all, THO Candlekeep Forum 7 May 2005 |
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Gary Dallison
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Posted - 09 May 2014 : 11:02:06
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Well since its a long way to the end of May and i'm pretty much finished with Issue II and polishing off Issue III i thought i would post a brief writeup of one of the Kings of Damara that i have detailed for my alternative Damaran lineage.
This is from Issue III and it still has to go through proof reading so please forgive the grammatical errors.
Feldrin the Exile (LG hm Paladin 9/ Knight 4): Born 1108 DR. Died 1171 DR. Whilst Prince Feldrin, son of Feldrin II, was never crowned king of Damara, he is not excluded from the lineage of Bloodfeathers because of his actions and holds a proud place in the family history. In 1150 DR his elderly and insane father attempted to declare war on Impiltur. Feldrin and his brother agreed that to save the people of Damara and Impiltur from much suffering their father had to die. Feldrin had no desire to be king and was the more physically capable of the two brothers so he volunteered for the task. Marching up the steps of Bloodfeather Palace, he reluctantly fought and disabled no less than ten members of the Royal Guard before he embraced his wild eyed father. Then taking his sword he thrust it through the king’s heart and held him as he passed on. His younger brother Veldrin I was crowned king and Feldrin was exiled, but he remained in line to the throne should Veldrin die without issue, such was the gratitude that Damara felt towards its exiled prince. A paladin of Ilmater who modelled himself after the Heltharn dynasty of Impiltur, Feldrin wandered the lands seeking atonement for his crimes. He created the Order of Fallen Princes; a knightly order containing only those divine servants who had fallen from grace and sought atonement for their actions through the order (typically by sacrificing themselves for the greater good). He spent much of his later life in Impiltur, attempting to repair the damage done to relations between Impiltur and Damara by his father. He also did his best to help his younger brother King Veldrin I, even though they would not meet again until his death. He was a personal advisor of Queen Ilmara for many years, and was instrumental in helping her retain Impiltur for her son as well as persuading Ilmara to aid Damara against the marilith Vaas. In 1171 DR, after the civil war in Impiltur had ended, Feldrin led the armies of Impiltur into Vaasa alongside his brother Veldrin. There they fought against Vaas and her demon hordes. Feldrin regained his honour and his paladinhood before he was slain in personal combat against Vaas and her guard.
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