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Aryalómë
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Posted - 13 Jul 2011 :  19:49:49  Show Profile Send Aryalómë a Private Message  Reply with Quote  Delete Topic
I have completed the prologue to my story, Wail of the Yathrinshee, and is available to be read at fanfiction.net. Just go to search and type in the name, or type Kiaransalee, and it will appear. My summary got cut off for some reason though. Please review it and tell me what you think!

MrHedgehog
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Posted - 16 Jul 2011 :  23:33:34  Show Profile  Visit MrHedgehog's Homepage Send MrHedgehog a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Seven hundred people doesn't sound like a small group to me! I didn't get the impression even that many drow lived in Maerimydra.

I didn't think Kiaransalee was dead in all the universe, only that she had been forgotten on Toril.
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Zireael
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Poland
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Posted - 17 Jul 2011 :  12:35:48  Show Profile  Visit Zireael's Homepage Send Zireael a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Are you Grand Magus Adam on ff.net, Erendriel..?
SiNafay Vrinn, the daughter of Lloth, from Ched Nasad!

http://zireael07.wordpress.com/
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Aryalómë
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Posted - 17 Jul 2011 :  13:22:48  Show Profile Send Aryalómë a Private Message  Reply with Quote
yes! :) THe seven hundred people are also followers from other close by surrounding areas, and other faithful to the Revenancer who came to the Acropoplis during the events of Storm of the Dead.
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Aryalómë
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USA
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Posted - 17 Jul 2011 :  15:58:42  Show Profile Send Aryalómë a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I used some wrong words in some places in the story. It makes me angry because I don't normally do that.
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MrHedgehog
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Posted - 17 Jul 2011 :  21:21:29  Show Profile  Visit MrHedgehog's Homepage Send MrHedgehog a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I look forward to the next installment. :)
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