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Snowblood |
Posted - 29 Aug 2009 : 14:46:18 Dear Scribes here is a bit of doggerel about the fall of Shantel Othreier originally called The Lay of Peraphus but more commonly known by skalds and troubadours of today as "The Song of a Sundered Crown"
What do people think?
The Song of a Sundered Crown
The processions of the pretender Paraded through the streets Peraphus Othreier the puppet Marching the Vyshaan drummers beat
Oblivious to the dangers Hammering at his door Peraphus the Pretender The feckless Vyshaan whore
Whose dark and evil heart Was filled with greed and lust Could never have dreamed his mother’s realm Would soon be ash and dust
For clan Hune and the Illithyri armies Their souls blighted by the poison of hate Had arrived with demons and dragons To smash Othreier’s gates
The dusky blades of the Branded King These knights from times of yore Stood firm against Wendonai’s might Loyal down to the core
Gathered on the plains of Sama On Chionathar’s southern bank Stood the proud and mighty Vyshaan horde In rank upon mithral rank
A hundred thousand Vyshaan blades Raised in grim salute Melted to bright and shiny slag Their voices smashed and mute
The implacable Selu’taar of Illithyr Called down stones from the sky A chromatic tempest of dweomer flames Gathered from stars on high
The earth boiled and trees did scream As forests were torn asunder Peraphus died, disbelief on his lips Denying his awful blunder
The Lightning flashed The thunder roared The rain came crashing As down it poured
Corellon wept in pity and shame As the bitch of the Web, she hungered The fields of green would soon emerge From the shards of the crown that sundered
http://phasai.deviantart.com/art/The-Song-of-a-Sundered-Crown-135149188 |
8 L A T E S T R E P L I E S (Newest First) |
Snowblood |
Posted - 09 Sep 2009 : 14:03:54 Myth Unnohyr next on list after Shantel Othreier...which just needs a new (sic) map or two...sigh....and the lay of Peraphus is included along with the back story too. |
Jakk |
Posted - 07 Sep 2009 : 04:46:02 Very nice... far beyond my bardic skills, certainly.
Not to derail the scroll or anything, but... how's Myth Unnohyr coming along? |
Snowblood |
Posted - 07 Sep 2009 : 04:39:01 Thankyou fellow scribes (smiles abashed)....its part of a little piece on ancient Shantel Othreier I've got in the slow-cooker.... |
bladeinAmn |
Posted - 06 Sep 2009 : 19:14:08 Excellent work Snowblood! |
The Sage |
Posted - 30 Aug 2009 : 01:21:56 Very interesting Snowblood.
As a Realms-music fan, I can definitely appreciate the scope of this particular work. I'm already thinking about how this might sound against some sheet music. |
Chosen of Moradin |
Posted - 29 Aug 2009 : 23:37:53 Very good, Snowblood! Congrats! |
Brynweir |
Posted - 29 Aug 2009 : 17:16:54 I would have to agree. Well beyond anything I could create |
Brian R. James |
Posted - 29 Aug 2009 : 17:03:52 quote: Originally posted by Snowblood
What do people think?
I think it's pretty awesome! |